ERROR CORRECTION SHEET

 1. When ı first heard that ı had been accepted to Middle East Technical Unıversity, ı was disappointed. Because ı did not like Ankara as a city. But my opinions have changed over time dramatically. Because Middle East Technical Unıversity is really a different world in Ankara.

2. It has been only one month since I came here. But I got used to this environment. Because, first of all, people from all of ages in here respect to each other.

3. I love Ankara,I love my dormitory,I love my new friends, I love my department, (!) I am content with everything which are belongs to METU.

4. If someone wants to walk , he or she can go and walk. And it is nice place to go and meet with my friends

5. We can easily see this by watching TV,surfing on the internet or maybe just looking around us.Because there are many people getting graduated from different kinds of universities but they're not even able to know what's going on around them or they don't even try to find good ways to improve the countries yhat they live in.

Detailed explanation: ‘ı’ should be written in capital letters. The Word ‘was’ should be used instead of ‘had been’, because when saying had been it means as if somebody else informed about that incident. The words ‘because’, ‘but’ and ‘and’ should not be used at the beginning of a sentence, they should be connected to the previous sentence with a comma.’As a city’ is not a proper usage. The Word ‘opinions’ should be used in singular form,  because the writer mentions only one idea. The correct spelling for ‘unıversity’ is ‘university’. ‘People from of all of ages’ is not a correct usage. It is wrong to us ‘in’ before here, so is ‘to’ after respect. In the third sentence, there are many sentences , so there should be used a connector to make a unified paragraph. It is wrong and unnecessary to use ‘are’ before the verb ‘belongs’. Saying ‘to go and…’ is a colloquial expression..( 4th paragraph). ‘Gettin graduated’ should be used as ‘graduating’. In academic writing ‘don’t, what’s, they’re are not accepted. We should use the complete form of all words. Lastly, it is obvious that the writer wrote the word ‘that’ as ‘yhat’ by mistake. A corrected edition of the text is as below:

1. When I first heard that I was accepted to Middle East Technical University, I was disappointed , because I did not like Ankara. However,  my opinion has changed dramatically over time, because Middle East Technical University is really a different world in Ankara.

2. It has been only one month since I came here. However, I got used to this environment, because, first of all, people of all ages respect each other here.

3. I love Ankara, I love my dormitory, I love my new friends, I love my department, and I am content with everything which belongs to METU.

4. If someone wants to walk , he or she can go and walk, and it is a nice place meet my friends

5. We can easily see this by watching TV, surfing on the internet or maybe just looking around us, There are many people graduating from different universities but they are not even able to know what is going on around them or they do not even try to find good ways to improve the countries that they live in.